Pitch

Johnny Lee Belamo likes to think he is an ordinary fifteen year old boy.     

If you’ve heard him sing, you’ve heard love.  If you’ve heard him sing you’ve heard hope.  If you’ve heard him sing you’ve heard life.  As they all fled your body. 

If you’ve seen the flames dance in his eyes you’ve known fear. If you’ve seen the flames dance you’ve known pain.  If you’ve seen the flames the music has stopped.  Only idiots pray for the music to stop.  The first time. 

But you’ll learn quickly to fear the eyes that Burn. 

But that’s the end. This is the MisEducation. Come sit with me and learn how Johnny Lee Belamo went from ordinary to something else.

The MisEducation of A minor is a mix of high school, family and super powered drama. It follows Johnny Lee Belamo on his journey to discover his place in the world after the murder of his mother.  He is forced to deal with not just her death but his burgeoning abilities, intense family secrets, his mother’s murderer, secret organizations and of course Math class.   

Still time for changes if you think I can improve i am DEFINITELY Open to ideas suggestions or Comments thanks.  

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2 thoughts on “Pitch

  1. Entering the book in the young adult genre is a good move. The Pitch paints a good picture of the main character and his journey to come. I am confident that it can peak the interest of would be readers to invest themselves.

  2. This is just a slight revision read it and see if it works for you. I’m not an expert, you need to grab the readers attention

    Johnny Lee Belamo likes tothink he is an ordinary fifteen-year-old boy.
    If you’ve heard him sing,you’ve heard the voice of love, hope, and life, as it fled through your body.

    The dancing flames in hiseyes are fear and pain. If thereare flames, the music is silenced.

    Quickly, you will learn tofear the eyes that burn

    This is the MisEducation.Come sit with me and learn how Johnny Lee Belamo went from ordinary to extraordinary.

    The MisEducation of A minor is amix of high school, family and super powered drama. It follows Johnny LeeBelamo on his journey to discover his place in the world after the murder ofhis mother. He is forced to deal with not just her death, but intensefamily secrets, his, burgeoning abilities, secret organizations, and of courseMath class.

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